This one should be pretty obvious, but never use asterisks in your story. If you don't know what that is, they're these little star thingys--> ***
The second I see one in a story, anywhere, I stop reading. It's a sure sign that the rest of the story is shit because you don't know what you're doing with yourself.
The second I see one in a story, anywhere, I stop reading. It's a sure sign that the rest of the story is shit because you don't know what you're doing with yourself.